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         <h1>Triangle / Lambdoma</h1>
 
         <p>
-          This instrument uses fractions to make a wide palette of just
+          This instrument uses basic fractions to make a wide palette of just
           intonation intervals available all at once.
         </p>
 
@@ -370,17 +370,18 @@
           shows it next to a grid of whole-number fractions, and demonstrates
           how one can use these ratios to find specific intervals. I had never
           seen just intonation demonstrated so elegantly, so I made this page to
-          explore the concept interactively.
+          explore the concept.
         </p>
 
         <p>
           I later learned that I had constructed the "lamboid diagram" or
           Lambdoma, named for its resemblance to the Greek letter Lambda Λ. The
-          synergy of color and sound in the Lambdoma, linking the octave to the
-          color wheel, was studied in depth by artist and sound practitioner
-          <a href="https://www.lambdoma.com/">Barbara Hero</a>. Hero made the
-          Lambdoma her life's work, and built an 8x8 electronic Lambdoma
-          instrument for sound healing purposes.
+          synergy of color and tone, linking the octave to the color wheel,
+          seemed intuitive, and revealed a beautiful pattern. This pattern had
+          earlier been uncovered by artist and sound practitioner
+          <a href="https://www.lambdoma.com/">Barbara Hero</a>, who built an 8x8
+          electronic Lambdoma instrument for sound healing purposes, using the
+          same pattern of colors.
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -405,7 +406,7 @@
             href="https://www.perseus.tufts.edu/hopper/text?doc=Perseus%3Atext%3A2008.01.0385%3Astephpage%3D1027b"
             >Plutarch</a
           >
-          in his commentary on Plato's <i>Timaeus</i>. It was
+          (ca. 100 CE) in his commentary on Plato's <i>Timaeus</i>. It was
           <a
             href="https://archive.org/details/bsb10527783/page/137/mode/1up"
             target="_blank"