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         <p>
           Within a Pythagorean tuning system, each scale can sound highly
-          distinctive, since the notes will not be distributed evenly within the
+          distinctive, since the notes will not be distributed evenly across the
           octave. In a sense, 12-tone equal temperament "bends" all of the notes
-          so they are evenly spaced. Fifths in equal temperament are not quite
-          pure but close enough, making it easy to modulate between keys. By
-          comparison, thirds are quite out of tune compared to a pure ratio
-          (5:4). Equal temperament invokes irrational numbers, creating
-          in-between intervals which do not exist on the Lambdoma. (Notes in
-          equal temperament are separated by an irrational ratio of 1 to the
-          12th root of 2 (1:<super>12</super>√2), which can only be approximated
-          by pure fractions.)
+          so they are evenly spaced. Fifths in equal temperament are all nearly
+          pure, making it easy to modulate between keys. By comparison, thirds
+          are quite out of tune compared to a pure ratio (5:4). Equal
+          temperament invokes irrational numbers, creating in-between intervals
+          which do not exist on the Lambdoma. (Notes in equal temperament are
+          separated by an irrational ratio of 1 to the 12th root of 2
+          (1:<super>12</super>√2), which can only be approximated by pure
+          fractions.)
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