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diff --git a/site/content/pages/about/index.md b/site/content/pages/about/index.md
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 <p><div style="font-size:20px;line-height:36px">Ever since government agencies began developing face recognition in the early 1960's, datasets of face images have always been central to the development and evaluation face recognition technology. Today, these datasets no longer originate in labs, but instead from family photo albums posted on social media sites, CCTV camera footage from college campuses, search engine queries for celebrities, cafe livestreams, or <a href="https://www.theverge.com/2017/8/22/16180080/transgender-youtubers-ai-facial-recognition-dataset">videos on YouTube</a>. </div></p>
 
-While many of these datasets include public figures such as politicans, athletes, and actors; they also include many non-public figures including digital activists, students, pedestrians, and people's semi-private shared photo albums. Some images are used with creative commons licenses, yet others were taken in unconstrained scenarios without awareness or consent. At first glance it appears many of the datasets were created for seemingly harmless academic research studies, but when examined further it becomes clear that they're also used by defense contractors in foreign countries. 
+While many of these datasets include public figures such as politicians, athletes, and actors; they also include many non-public figures including digital activists, students, pedestrians, and people's semi-private shared photo albums. Some images are used with creative commons licenses, yet others were taken in unconstrained scenarios without awareness or consent. At first glance it appears many of the datasets were created for seemingly harmless academic research, but when examined further it becomes clear that they're also used by foreign defense agencies.
 
 During the last year, hundreds of these facial analysis datasets created "in the wild" have been collected to understand how they contribute to a global supply chain of biometric data that is helping to power the global facial recognition industry.
 
diff --git a/site/content/pages/datasets/brainwash/index.md b/site/content/pages/datasets/brainwash/index.md
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 status: published
 title: Brainwash
-desc: Brainwash is a dataset of people from webcams the Brainwash Cafe in San Francisco being used to train face detection algorithms
-subdesc: Brainwash dataset includes 11,918 images of "everyday life of a busy downtown cafe"
+desc: Brainwash is a dataset of webcam images from the Brainwash Cafe in San Francisco
+subdesc: The Brainwash dataset includes 11,918 images of "everyday life of a busy downtown cafe" and is used for training head detection algorithms
 slug: brainwash
 cssclass: dataset
 color: #ffaa00
diff --git a/site/content/pages/datasets/lfw/index.md b/site/content/pages/datasets/lfw/index.md
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 status: published
 title: Labeled Faces in The Wild
-desc: Labeled Faces in The Wild (LFW) is a database of face photographs designed for studying the problem of unconstrained face recognition.
-subdesc: It includes 13,456 images of 4,432 people's images copied from the Internet during 2002-2004.
+desc: Labeled Faces in The Wild (LFW) is the first facial recognition dataset created entirely from online photos
+subdesc: It includes 13,456 images of 4,432 people's images copied from the Internet during 2002-2004 and is the most frequently used dataset in the world for benchmarking face recognition algorithms.
 image: assets/background.jpg
 slug: lfw
 year: 2007
diff --git a/site/content/pages/datasets/mars/index.md b/site/content/pages/datasets/mars/index.md
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 status: published
 title: MARS
-desc: <span style="color:#ffaa00">MARS</span> is a dataset of people...
-subdesc: MARS includes...
+desc: The <span style="color:#ffaa00">Motion Analysis and Re-identification Set (MARS) is a MARS</span> dataset is collection of CCTV footage 
+subdesc: The MARS dataset includes 1,191,003 of people and is used for training person re-identification algorithms
 slug: mars
 cssclass: dataset
 image: assets/background.jpg