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 Our [earlier research](https://www.ft.com/content/cf19b956-60a2-11e9-b285-3acd5d43599e) on the [MS Celeb](/datasets/msceleb) and [Duke](/datasets/duke_mtmc) datasets published with the Financial Times revealed that several computer vision image datasets created by US companies and universities were unexpectedly also used for research by the National University of Defense Technology in China, along with top Chinese surveillance firms including SenseTime, SenseNets, CloudWalk, Hikvision, and Megvii/Face++ which have all been linked to the oppressive surveillance of Uighur Muslims in Xinjiang.
 
-In this new research for the [Munich Security Conference's Transnational Security Report](https://tsr.securityconference.de) we provide summary statistics about the origins and endpoints of facial recognition information supply chains. To make it more personal, we gathered additional data on the number of public photos from Embassies that are currently being used in facial recognition datasets.
+In this new research for the [Munich Security Conference's Transnational Security Report](https://tsr.securityconference.de) we provide summary statistics about the origins and endpoints of facial recognition information supply chains. To make it more personal, we gathered additional data on the number of public photos from embassies that are currently being used in facial recognition datasets.
 
 
 ### 24 Million Non-Cooperative Faces
 
 In total, we analyzed 30 publicly available face recognition and face analysis datasets that collectively include over 24 million non-cooperative images. Of these 24 million images, over 15 million face images are from Internet search engines, over 5.8 million from Flickr.com, over 2.5 million from the Internet Movie Database (IMDb.com), and nearly 500,000 from CCTV footage. All 24 million images were collected without any explicit consent, a type of face image researchers call "in the wild".
 
-Next we manually verified 1,134 publicly available research papers that cite these datasets to determine who was using the data and where it was being used. Even though all of the images originated in the United States, the publicly available research citations show that only about 25% citations are from the country of the origin while the majority of citations are from China.
+Next we manually verified 1,134 publicly available research papers that cite these datasets to determine who was using the data and where it was being used. Even though the vast majority of the images originated in the United States, the publicly available research citations show that only about 25% citations are from the country of the origin while the majority of citations are from China.