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 MegaPixels.cc Terms and Privacy
 
-MegaPixels is an independent art and research project about the origins and ethics of publicly available face analysis image datasets. By accessing MegaPixels (the *Service* or *Services*) you agree to the terms and conditions set forth below.
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-### Changes
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-We reserve the right, at our sole discretion, to modify or replace these Terms at any time. If a revision is material we will try to provide at least 30 days notice prior to any new terms taking effect. What constitutes a material change will be determined at our sole discretion.
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-By continuing to access or use our Service after those revisions become effective, you agree to be bound by the revised terms. If you do not agree to the new terms, please stop using the Service.
+MegaPixels is an independent and academic art and research project about the origins and ethics of publicly available face analysis image datasets. By accessing MegaPixels (the *Service* or *Services*) you agree to the terms and conditions set forth below.
 
 
 ## Privacy
 
-The MegaPixels site has been designed to minimize the amount of network requests to 3rd party services and therefore prioritize the privacy of the viewer by only loading local dependencies. Additionaly, this site does not use any anaytics programs to monitor site viewers. In fact, the only data collected are the necessary server logs that used only for preventing misuse, which are deleteted at regular short-term intervals.
+The MegaPixels site has been designed to minimize the amount of network requests to 3rd party services and therefore prioritize the privacy of the viewer. This site does not use any local or external analytics programs to monitor site viewers. In fact, the only data collected are the necessary server logs used only for preventing misuse, which are deleted at short-term intervals.
 
 ## 3rd Party Services
 
-In order to provide certain features of the site, some 3rd party services are needed. Currently, the MegaPixels.cc site uses two 3rd party services: (1) Leaflet.js for the interactive map and (2 Digital Ocean Spaces as a condent delivery network. Both services encrypt your requests to their server using HTTPS and neither service requires storing any cookies or authentication. However, both services will store files in your web browser's local cache (local storage) to improve loading performance. None of these local storage files are using for analytics, cookie-like technologies, tracking, or any similar purpose.
+In order to provide certain features of the site, some 3rd party services are needed. Currently, the MegaPixels.cc site uses two 3rd party services: (1) Leaflet.js for the interactive map and (2) Digital Ocean Spaces as a content delivery network. Both services encrypt your requests to their server using HTTPS and neither service requires storing any cookies or authentication. However, both services will store files in your web browser's local cache (local storage) to improve loading performance. None of these local storage files are using for analytics, tracking, or any similar purpose.
 
 ### Links To Other Web Sites
 
-The MegaPixels.cc contains many links to 3rd party websites, especically in the list of citations that are provided for each dataset. This website has no control over and assumes no responsibility for, the content, privacy policies, or practices of any third party web sites or services. You further acknowledge and agree that megapixels.cc shall not be responsible or liable, directly or indirectly, for any damage or loss caused or alleged to be caused by or in connection with use of or reliance on any such content, goods or services available on or through any such web sites or services.
+The MegaPixels.cc contains many links to 3rd party websites, especially in the list of citations that are provided for each dataset. This website has no control over and assumes no responsibility for, the content, privacy policies, or practices of any third party web sites or services. You  acknowledge and agree that megapixels.cc shall not be responsible or liable, directly or indirectly, for any damage or loss caused or alleged to be caused by or in connection with use of or reliance on any such content, goods or services available on or through any such web sites or services.
 
 We advise you to read the terms and conditions and privacy policies of any third-party web sites or services that you visit.
 
 
 ### The Information We Provide
 
-While every intention is made to verify and publish only verifiablenformation, at times amendments to accuracy may be required. In no event will the operators of this site be liable for your use or misuse of the information provided.
+While every intention is made to publish only verifiable information, at times existing information may be revised or deleted and new information may be  added for clarity or correction. In no event will the operators of this site be liable for your use or misuse of the information provided.
 
-We may terminate or suspend access to our Service immediately, without prior notice or liability, for any reason whatsoever, including without limitation if you breach the Terms.
+We may terminate or suspend access to our Service immediately without prior notice or liability, for any reason whatsoever, including without limitation if you breach the Terms.
 
 All provisions of the Terms which by their nature should survive termination shall survive termination, including, without limitation, ownership provisions, warranty disclaimers, indemnity and limitations of liability.
 
@@ -67,7 +61,7 @@ Without prior written consent, you shall not:
 
 (iii) use services, software or any manual or automatic device, tool, or process designed to circumvent any restriction, condition, or technological measure that controls access to the Services in any way, including overriding any security feature or bypassing or circumventing any access controls or use limits of the Services;
 
-(iv) cache or archive the Content (except for a public search engine’s use of spiders for creating search indices);
+(iv) cache or archive the Content (except for a public search engine’s use of spiders for creating search indices) with prior written consent;
 
 (v) take action that imposes an unreasonable or disproportionately large load on our network or infrastructure; and
 
@@ -83,4 +77,8 @@ Our failure to enforce any right or provision of these Terms will not be conside
 
 ### Indemnity
 
-You hereby indemnify, defend and hold harmless MegaPixels (and its creators) and all officers, directors, owners, agents, information providers, affiliates, licensors and licensees (collectively, the "Indemnified Parties") from and against any and all liability and costs, including, without limitation, reasonable attorneys' fees, incurred by the Indemnified Parties in connection with any claim arising out of any breach by you or any user of your account of these Terms of Service or the foregoing representations, warranties and covenants. You shall cooperate as fully as reasonably required in the defense of any such claim. We reserves the right, at its own expense, to assume the exclusive defense and control of any matter subject to indemnification by you.
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+You hereby indemnify, defend and hold harmless MegaPixels (and its creators) and all officers, directors, owners, agents, information providers, affiliates, licensors and licensees (collectively, the "Indemnified Parties") from and against any and all liability and costs, including, without limitation, reasonable attorneys' fees, incurred by the Indemnified Parties in connection with any claim arising out of any breach by you or any user of your account of these Terms of Service or the foregoing representations, warranties and covenants. You shall cooperate as fully as reasonably required in the defense of any such claim. We reserves the right, at its own expense, to assume the exclusive defense and control of any matter subject to indemnification by you.
+
+### Changes
+
+We reserve the right, at our sole discretion, to modify or replace these Terms at any time. By continuing to use or access our Service after revisions become effective, you agree to be bound by the revised terms. If you do not agree to revised terms, please do not use the Service.
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