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From: julian laplace <julescarbon@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 7 Jul 2025 23:31:41 +0200
Subject: docs

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         <h1>Triangle / Lambdoma</h1>
         <p>
-          This instrument uses a basic cartesian plot of the rational numbers,
-          expressed as fractions, to make a wide palette of just intonation
-          intervals quickly accessible.
+          This instrument uses simple fractions to make a wide palette of just
+          intonation intervals available all at once.
         </p>
         <p>
-          The <b>harmonic series</b> (1/1, 2/1, 3/1 ...) is expressed by the
-          rows, while the <b>undertone series</b> (1/1, 1/2, 1/3, ...) is
-          expressed by the columns. The resulting intervals are instantly
-          musically meaningful, though they arise out of these simple ratios.
+          The rows display the <b>overtone series</b> (1/1, 2/1, 3/1 ...), while
+          the <b>undertone series</b> (1/1, 1/2, 1/3, ...) is shown by the
+          columns. The resulting intervals are instantly musically meaningful,
+          though they arise from simple ratios.
         </p>
         <p>
           <b>Brightness</b> indicates octave. <b>Color</b> indicates position in
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