From c9c353296dff4b4f0afa770e106d67eb8fe80c70 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: adamhrv <adam@ahprojects.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Apr 2019 12:52:06 +0200
Subject: txt tweaks

---
 site/includes/chart.html                | 3 +--
 site/includes/citations.html            | 4 ++--
 site/includes/map.html                  | 9 +++++----
 site/includes/supplementary_header.html | 3 ++-
 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'site')

diff --git a/site/includes/chart.html b/site/includes/chart.html
index 45c13493..01c2e83b 100644
--- a/site/includes/chart.html
+++ b/site/includes/chart.html
@@ -2,8 +2,7 @@
   <h3>Who used {{ metadata.meta.dataset.name_display }}?</h3>
 
   <p>
-    This bar chart presents a ranking of the top countries where citations originated.  Mouse over individual columns
-    to see yearly totals.  These charts show at most the top 10 countries.
+    This bar chart presents a ranking of the top countries where dataset citations originated.  Mouse over individual columns to see yearly totals. These charts show at most the top 10 countries.
   </p>
  
  </section>
diff --git a/site/includes/citations.html b/site/includes/citations.html
index f15c5148..74ac5cdc 100644
--- a/site/includes/citations.html
+++ b/site/includes/citations.html
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <section class="applet_container">
 
-  <h3>Citations</h3>
+  <h3>Dataset Citations</h3>
   <p>
-    Citations were collected from <a href="https://www.semanticscholar.org">Semantic Scholar</a>, a website which aggregates and indexes research papers.  The citations were geocoded using names of institutions found in the PDF front matter, or as listed on other resources.  These papers have been manually verified to show that researchers downloaded and used the dataset to train and/or test machine learning algorithms.
+    The dataset citations used in the visualizations were collected from <a href="https://www.semanticscholar.org">Semantic Scholar</a>, a website that aggregates and indexes research papers. Each citation has been geocoded using names of institutions found in the PDF front matter, or as listed on other resources then manually verified to show that researchers downloaded and used the dataset to train and/or test machine learning algorithms.
   </p>
   <p>
     Add [button/link] to download CSV. Add search input field to filter. Expand number of rows to 10. Reduce URL text to show only the domain (ie https://arxiv.org/pdf/123456 --> arxiv.org)
diff --git a/site/includes/map.html b/site/includes/map.html
index 867ada4c..31d577cd 100644
--- a/site/includes/map.html
+++ b/site/includes/map.html
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <section>
 	
-	<h3>Information Supply Chain</h3>
+	<h3>Biometric Trade Routes</h3>
 <!-- 
 	<div class="map-sidebar right-sidebar">
 	  <h3>Legend</h3>
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@
 	</div>
 	 -->
 	<p>
-		To understand how {{ metadata.meta.dataset.name_display }} has been used around the world...
-		affected global research on computer vision, surveillance, defense, and consumer technology, the and where this dataset has been used the locations of each organization that used or referenced the datast 
+		To help understand how {{ metadata.meta.dataset.name_display }} has been used around the world for commercial, military and academic research; publicly available research citations {{ metadata.meta.dataset.name_display }} are collected, verified, and geocoded to show the biometric trade routes of people appearing in the images. Click on the markers to reveal reserach projects at that location.
 	</p>
  
  </section>
 
 <section class="applet_container fullwidth">
  <div class="applet" data-payload="{&quot;command&quot;: &quot;map&quot;}"></div>
+
 </section>
 
 <div class="caption">
@@ -31,8 +31,9 @@
 	</ul>
 </div>
 
-<section>
+<!-- <section>
 	<p class='subp'>
 		[section under development] {{ metadata.meta.dataset.name_display }} ... Standardized paragraph of text about the map. Sed ut perspiciatis, unde omnis iste natus error sit voluptatem accusantium doloremque laudantium, totam rem aperiam eaque ipsa, quae ab illo inventore veritatis et quasi architecto beatae vitae dicta sunt, explicabo.
 	</p>
 </section>
+ -->
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/site/includes/supplementary_header.html b/site/includes/supplementary_header.html
index 5fd4b2b4..bcd84223 100644
--- a/site/includes/supplementary_header.html
+++ b/site/includes/supplementary_header.html
@@ -6,5 +6,6 @@
       <div class="hr-wave-line hr-wave-line2"></div>
   </div>
 
-  <h2>Supplementary Information</h2>
+  <h3>Supplementary Information</h3>
+  
 </section>
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